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50 thoughts on “IELTS General Writing Task 1: Formal Letters | ALL THE WAY TO IELTS 9 with Jay!”
  1. Jay I love your teaching method, I have heard a lot about ielt writing being the most difficult part.
    But unfortunately with your explanation it looks very interesting.
    I can't wait to sit for my exam again

  2. Here's my first paragraph
    I am writing to let you know that I am currently not pleased with my living conditions. This unhappy feeling is caused by my roommate, who has made living with her almost unbearable and impossible for me to carry out my work effectively.

  3. Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to let you know that I am having trouble living in my apartment with the current conditions. Even though there is nothing wrong with the accommodation itself, however, my present housemate has become literally intolerable making it difficult for me to concentrate on my work. I hope you would consider my situation favorably.

    Let me explain my situation. Everything was fine until a few months ago when my housemate first moved in. It is pertinent to mention here that my previous housemate was very kind and considerate in contrast to the current one. He practices playing the drums all night long making it impossible for me to sleep soundly, and resultantly hampering my overall work performance.

    Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room? I would rather live with someone like myself who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as my sleep and work performance are not compromised.

    Thank you for your consideration.

    Yours faithfully,

  4. Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am writing to let you know i`m unsatisfied with what i`m going through in this room despite it been cozy and smart. really can`t concentrate fully with my studies since my new room mate has been playing loud music all through, i have talked to him about it severally but still he is always at it.

  5. Let me explain my situation, like i had mentioned earlier about my room mate habit, i simply can`t do anything in my studies while in the house since he sings along which distracts me from my concentration.

  6. would you kindly talk to him about it or move me from the house as i would prefer being in a more quieter place and peaceful environment. This will be of much help to me.
    i would also like that the room that i will be moved to be with someone who will be more considerate of the person he will be living with,

  7. Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. My accommodation is fine but my housemate has made living in my apartment unbearable. I hope you would consider my situation favorably.

  8. Let me explain my situation. The trouble started when my housemate moved in earlier this year, he plays incessant loud music late at night and he also comes home with lots of friends. This has robbed me of my personal space, peace, and quietness. And as such, I have been unable to concentrate at school.

  9. Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room where it is much quieter, I just only want a much more considerable housemate that prefers peace and quiet just like I do so we do not keep having issues.

    Thank you for your consideration.

    Yours Faithfully,


  10. I am writing to let you know that I am not happy about the current living conditions in my apartment. The accommodation itself is fine but my roommate has become intolerable recently. I will be happy if my request is considered favourably.

  11. Let me explain my situation. The issue started about two months ago when my new housemate moved in. She usually stays up till midnight answering calls and also plays loud music. My old roommate is considerate and more quiet. Owing to this I have not been able to sleep well which affects my concentration in my studies.

  12. Let me explain my situation.The problem started when the rains poured.Prior to that,everything was fine.I am waking up only to find my books in a dam of water. Thus is disturbing me as my schooling materials are being destroyed.I am also failing to do my work properly as am ending up mopping my room in the middle of the night instead of studying.

  13. Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing to let you know that there are some difficulties that I am encoutering right now in my accommodation. Accomodation itself is quite fine. But my housemate seems to be insensitive by his wrong doings. I hope for your kind considerations.

    Let me explain my situation. Since I am currently working at home, I need a working environment that is peacful and quiet. Ever since my housemate moved in, my environment started to be loud and noisy that I can not work properly and peacefully. He always plays loud music and doing some unnecessary noises.

    Would you kindly suggest another room for me to moved in? I do not mind if itโ€™s a bit expensive as long as it is more quieter and away from any kinds of noises.

    Thank you for your kind consideration.

    Yours faithfully,


  14. Dear Sir or Madam,
    I am writing to let you know that I am dissatisfied with my current living condition. While accommodation is fine but room mate who has moved in three month ago has made the conditions intolerable.I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
    Let me explain my situation, It all started when my room mate moved in three months ago. My previous roommate was considerate, but the current is dis concerned regarding his academic performance, one stays up all night and plays incessantly loud music. I cannot sleep properly therefore I am unable to concentrate on my studies as well.
    Would you kindly transfer me to a quieter room where room mate is a bit considerate about others. I am fine with the current accommodation as well, if the roommate becomes considerate, with whom I am living with.
    Thank you for your consideration.
    Yours faithfully,

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